Biro and Compass

Just to add to niteowl's critique..."Sieze" should be "seize"; you're also missing a few apostrophes, check those again. It's a good idea, and I think, although it does need some ...

Just one thing: I don't suppose you could point out to me the two different generations, could you? Because I don't think that was intentional...

I basically agree with the other two: powerful descriptions. The whole thing was neatly split up, too.

The Wristband Age you preach your one-size-fits-all spiritual philosophy from a soapbox on sky TV perfect for the wristband age Good causes are thought up in boardrooms. Morals are bought ...

Duct Tape and Razorblades “…the worst weekend of your life, at the mercy of duct tape and razorblades…” – Kurt Cobain ~ “Hold your breath and count to ten…then fall ...

Well...I enjoyed the imagery in this, for example the line about "writing memories on a brown paper bag", which was one of those lines which just gives you a perfect ...

Hey, I'm Biro and Compass, found this site through a link-from-a-link-from-a-link which led me from through all manner of writing sites...Twas a fun journey though.

This was, overall, an interesting idea eloquently expressed; I particularly liked the first stanza. However, as has been pointed out, on line 11 the 'you' should be your; just a ...

This was...fascinating. I loved the way you manipulated the words, an interesting and unique style of writing which is a little like Pete Doherty at his best, if you'll let ...